"Development of Banished began in August 2011 and has been developed solely by Luke Hodorowicz" - was (correct tense).
(I would have replaced it with this outright, but I posted it here first just in case you wanted to change/correct anything) Hazards in the game come in the form of harsh weather conditions, fires, depression, starvation, an ageing population. Keeping them healthy, happy and well-fed are pivotal to making the town prosper. How about The citizens of the society act as the player's primary resource.
The third paragraph of the gameplay section would need to be paraphrased so it doesn't rely on a single quote.
" Additional citizens come from two sources, the birth of children" - I think linking children could be overlinking.
"The player must assign citizens to various jobs such as a builder or fisherman" - such as building and fishing.
"with reviewers praising graphics and early difficulty" - praising its graphics, and isn't it meant to be "easy" instead of early difficulty? Unless it's referring to the difficulty in the early parts of the game.
" Banished received mixed reviews on release" - italics needed.
JAG UAR 18:02, 29 December 2016 (UTC) Reply Initial comments The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review. This review is transcluded from Talk:Banished (video game)/GA1.
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